After reviewing my peer’s essay’s, I have learned that reading over my work and double checking everything is substantial to a good essay. I was never really taught to look at the “global” part of it. I was always told to just read over my work, double check it, and make sure that my thesis correlates with my essay. I now know the importance of making sure that my essay relates to the bigger picture. Sometimes just reading it over without editing it is going to help me write a better essay.