My goal for the revision process is to be more specific with my thoughts and opinions. I need to the readers to know that it is my opinion rather than a fact. The steps that I plan on taking to achieve this is to eliminate what is not needed and facts that are not true. To do this, I will go through each paragraph and delete and/or fix sentences that may have this issue. I do fear that I will run into a challenge. That challenge will be trying to fix sentences that I feel are very strong. I don’t want to fix sentences if they really support my thesis and claim sentences. I also fear deleting sentences that really correlate with my thesis and claim sentence. I don’t want to get rid of a sentence unless it does not relate to what I am saying at all. I will get rid of it if it is not necessary. If this is too hard to fix myself, I can always talk to my peers about it, talk to Mrs. Emerson, go to SASC, and use my Little Seagull and my They Say I Say book. I think that this goal is very doable, but it will be challenging for me in some parts.