When picking my chapter to read, I wanted to choose one that I know could help me with the essay I am currently working on. I chose chapter 11. I chose this chapter because right under the title said “Using the Templates to Revise” and I thought that was a great chapter to read for my essay. What I found most helpful in this chapter was that it pointed out things that a great essay should have. One that really caught my eye was using transitions to connect each paragraph.

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